Can anyone tell me what's wrong with my resume?

it seems fine to me...the only thing i would do to make it stand out is maybe put it on a different color paper ..nothing to colorful but maybe a beige it could be any color but a color that is very light...and maybe shorten it a little more...make sure it fits on one page...some people dont like to read so much..like maybe you can take out some things that arent as important ..good luck and maybe you can help me with my questions..